This story is for 14+ year olds, and definitely not for people who don't like swearing.
Rosie Sumner
“Oi, Rosie, what’ve you been up
to now?” Billy McKenna shouted as the policewoman pushed me towards the squad
car. I shrugged at him. It was none of his goddamn business.
PC Smithwell put her hand on the
top of my head to make sure I didn’t smash it on the top of the door. It was
just as well, I hadn’t slept in days and I wasn’t concentrating properly so her
hand took a bashing. “I’m sorry, innit,” I muttered.
“Don’t worry, just get in the
car; let’s get it over with shall we?” she said.
I saw the net curtains twitching
all the way up the road. Probably the most excitement that shitty little street
had seen in a long time. I couldn’t wait to get away from all the nosy,
gossiping neighbours.
They didn’t put the lights and
sirens on as we drove away. I was gutted – that was the bit I’d been looking
forward to. As they pulled into the station car park, Officer Smithwell glanced
back at me.
“What?” I asked, without
thinking. I could do without being the centre of attention; people looking at
me like that make me nervous.
“Nearly there,” she said. “Just
wait a sec while we park.”
I rolled my eyes. As if I’d try
and make a jump for it while they were still driving.
“Can I have a smoke?” I asked.
PC Smithwell looked shocked. “I
don’t think so,” she said.
“I’ve been nicking my Dad’s for
years,” I replied. “Please. I’m craving it; I’m proper hooked.”
“Okay, just one,” she said. I
figured she wasn’t all bad then, even if she was Old Bill.
I took the cigarette out of the
box she offered me, and as she held a light, I inhaled my first nicotine of the
morning. “God, that feels better,” I said as I exhaled. “Bloody grateful, I
have to say.”
PC Smithwell smiled at me for the
first time. I don’t know why she was so fucking up-tight; it was alright for
her with her fancy uniform and her neat hair. I was the one sitting in the back
of the car.
“Come on then Rosie, let’s get
you processed,” she said once I’d finished my smoke.
Processed. What the hell was that meant to mean? I shrugged.
Smithwell got out of the car and came
to open the door for me. I had tried myself but they had the child lock
switched on. Bloody cheek. She took my arm as we walked towards the door and as
it swooshed open I smelt the weirdest mixture of cleaning fluid and stale
urine. The piss was coming from an old tramp in the corner, I think. It
certainly wasn’t from me.
“We’ve got a room booked,”
Smithwell told a man behind a desk. All I could see at the time was a sign
saying, “bullet proof glass” on the screen. The man must’ve pressed something
as another door beeped and then opened. Smithwell took me into a small
corridor.
“Right, Rosie. We’re in here,”
she said, opening a door to Interview Room 1.
I walked in; saw a table in the
middle of a bunch of chairs, and a plate with biscuits on it. My stomach gave a
massive rumble and I picked up a biscuit and shoved it into my mouth whole,
before thinking about asking.
“I’m starvin’” I said. “I haven’t
eaten for a couple of days.”
“You’ve been busy haven’t you,”
PC Smithwell said. Busy alright.
“Do you want a drink?” she asked
me and I flinched involuntarily. “I mean, juice, tea, coffee,” she said.
“Orange juice would be ace,” I
said. I gulped it down in one go when she’d poured me some. It was quality
stuff, not like that cheap shit we had at home. When we used to have stuff like
juice.
“Okay there’s someone here to see
you now,” Smithwell said. “You’d be well advised to answer their questions as
best you can.”
I mumbled. I hate questions. They
always cause trouble.
The door opened and a tall man
walked into the room. He looked smart and happy, he smiled as he looked at me,
said, “Hello, I’m Brendan Masters,” and held out his hand.
I rubbed my palm on my jeans
before taking his hand. He looked proper clean and smart, I didn’t feel right
shaking his hand in my state.
I noticed Brendan glance at PC
Smithwell and for a fraction of a second his face looked different, kind of
puzzled and questioning. No idea what that was about. He opened a notepad.
“Right Rosie, what’s your date of
birth,” he began.
I told him and he wrote it down.
“Okay you don’t have to answer
anything you want to, just tell me to stop if you feel uncomfortable,” he said.
“What happened to the truth, the
whole truth and nothing but the fucking truth?” I asked.
“Oh, sweetheart, you’ve not been
arrested,” PC Smithwell said.
“But Dad said it was my fault,” I
said.
I couldn’t understand what the
hell was going on. Dad was yelling at them when they came for me but no-one had
bothered to tell me anything.
“We’ve brought you here to get
you somewhere safe, Rosie,” Brendan said gently. “We’ll find somewhere for you
to stay while we find out what’s happening with your Dad.”
“You mean… you mean, I don’t have
to go back there?” I asked. “Thank god for that, I was wondering what he would
do to me when I went home.”
We talked a bit more and then
there was a knock on the door.
“This is Mr and Mrs Cordon,
they’re going to have you to stay for a while,” Brendan said.
I looked at the people, they
looked smart and friendly.
“How old are you, Rosie?” Mr
Cordon asked.
“I’m nearly thirteen,” I replied.
I saw them look at each other and
Mrs Cordon looked like she was going to cry.
It was only when we left the
council offices that we walked past a mirror. My right eye was swollen,
black and purple.
Thank fuck I don’t have to go
back to stay with Dad again.
Haha, I like that you saved your wretched-mouthed character for the older-kids-lit bin. That was charitable of you, but what would she say about this?
ReplyDeleteOh John, I dread to think! I was a bit disappointed that she turned into such a mouthy character but she wrote herself so it is what it is. Thanks for visiting!
DeleteWell I love swearing and I loved this! I think what I really loved was the details of her getting and sitting in the car and looking out the window. It's a scene we've seen loads of times before, but never really experienced it from the perspective of the person sitting in the back seat.
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I'm glad she swears, or at least I understand it. It gives her some power. I want to think she's going to be ok after all this.
ReplyDeleteVery involving piece and I enjoyed Rosie's character and that sense that she was at fault, nice pyschological touches. There's a lot in this.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you took us in one direction, then sent us in another, but made it all make sense. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad she doen't have to go back to stay with Dad again too!
This is a really powerful piece of writing and very sad. I like the style of your writing in this. Rosie's character comes across strongly, I'd like to read more about her. I'm so glad I read it.
ReplyDeleteI didn't foresee the ending, I thought she was just another "teen in trouble" as so many are, not the victim of domestic abuse (as again, so many are, usually silently too)
ReplyDeleteThis touches on a terrible world that is the reality for many people, both young, and not so young.
I like Rosie. I hope she makes some more appearances here.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this story, vivid characters and a great ending.
ReplyDeleteSo happy Rosie made it out of there, loved how she thought she is in trouble the whole time. In spite of the mouth on her, she is a child and hope she is alright. You write so well.
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